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Heavyn's Dream- Finished (12/28/06)
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This is my first story that i am posting. I hope you guys like it. It started out as a project that Fexygurl and I was working on but i kind of took it over. Some of the content might be a bit Inappropriate so if you are offended by anything please feel free to contact me and tell me. Ok here goes nothing



Shake that laffy taffy, that laffy taffy. Girl shake that laffy taffy. Her cell phone rang. "Hello," a sleepy voice said. "Hey 'Quita." "Yeah." "I'll be there." "8:30?" "Ok." She hung the phone up and rolled over on her back. She started to fall back to sleep and her mom came in the room.
"Heavyn, come on down stairs. Your father and I rented that movie Ayliah wanted to see, and you promised her you would watch it with her." Her mom went back downstairs. She continued to lay there, thinking about the life she really wanted. She knew she could never live up to the standards her parents expected her to. She wanted to be like her cousin, TaQuita. "Alright now I already told you to get up. Don't make me come in there." Her mom said, this time with tone. She threw on her favorite jeans and tank top, grabbed her phone, and went downstairs.
Half way into the movie, her phone rang. Shake that laffy taffy, that laffy taffy. Girl shake that laffy taffy. "Hello." "What 'Quita?" "I'm watching a movie with Liah.." Her mom grabbed the phone.

"She'll call you back when the movie goes off TaQuita." "Ok, bye." She hung the phone up and turned it off. "I'll hold on to this until the movie is over." They finished watching the movie. Heavyn looked at the time, it was almost 7:00 pm. She ran upstairs to get ready for the party.


Her mom called her downstairs to see what she was wearing. She had on a mini skirt and a halter. "And where is the rest of your outfit? You know you can't leave this house looking like that." Heavyn sighed hard. Her dad came in the living room and examined what she had on.

"Heavyn go upstairs and change. No daughter of mine will dress like a hooker."

"But dad.."

"No buts. Change or don't go. Now go."

"Yes sir." She walked up the stairs hard and into her room. I hate this, she thought as she changed. I can't wait to move out; no one will be able to tell me what to do. She put on a longer skirt and a sweater over her original outfit. She walked downstairs to get approval.


"Now that's better," her dad said. She gave them each a hug and kiss and went to get in her car. She drove to her aunt's house and immediately went to TaQuita's room to change.

"Girl what tha **** did you have on? You know I wasn't gonna let you come with me dressed like that." She was about to talk. "Oh, don't tell me. Your 'rents made you wear that hideous outfit. I knew it. Thank God my momma ain't like her sista, ****."

"I know, I wish they would ease up. I'm not a kid anymore. I can't wait to move out into my own place." TaQuita gave her 'the look'. "I mean our own place."


"Girl this party is bangin'. I know you see all these fine dudes checkin' us out, cause we the ****."

"Quita you crazy." They walked around and found some empty seats. TaQuita got up to go get something to drink. A fine dude came and sat next to Heavyn.

"Hey ma what's yo name?"

"Heavyn." She replied.

"Heavyn? That's a sexy *** name." He got a little closer to her.

"And you are?"

"My bad ma. I'm J, but you can call me Jamal." He gave her a once over, "Girl you lookin good in that skirt."

"I know right?" TaQuita came back with the drinks. She gave Heavyn 'the look'. "Oh, this my cousin Quita."
"I know ma. This my homegirl." He looked at TaQuita. "Why the **** you didn't tell me you had a fine *** cousin? Damn girl, she off da chain."

"My bad, J, damn. Don't jump on my case. Anyways, where is Devonte? He know he needs to come see me."

"He'll be here. But if you would excuse me I need to finish talking to yo cousin."

"Excuse me," Heavyn said, "but I need to be excused. Quita where is the bathroom?"

"Down the hall." She went to the bathroom while TaQuita and Jamal talked.


Heavyn sat there wishing TaQuita would hurry up. Jamel was talking her ears off. He was cute but Heavyn couldn’t help her eyes from scanning the room for more better prospects.



“Oh my god! Heavyn how my hair look?” TaQuita came running over to Heavyn. She was trying her hardest to fix herself up without a mirror.



“You good Quita. Who done came in here that’s makin you act like that?”


“Eww mad thirsty. You look real desperate right now” Jamel said while rolling his eyes. He just could not understand why girls always fell to Devonte’s feet, Jamel envied him so much. With these thought out of his head he walked up to Devonte. “Yo what up?”


“Nothin homey” Devonte said as they gave each other a pound. “Yo its mad weak in here. Where they get that DJ from?” Devonte and Jamel shared a chuckle.


“Come on let me introduce you to my baby daddy” Taquita said as she pulled Heavyn’s hand to go with her. TaQuita had liked Devonte for some time now but never knew how to break the ice. Taquita is far from shy but something about Devonte made her weak. “Hi Devonte, I thought you wasn’t gonna make it.”


Devonte caressed her face and said “Baby, and miss being with you?” Jamel and Heavyn bust out laughin. Devonte had to laugh himself and as he looked up he saw Heavyn. “Damn ma I aint never seen you before. You from around here?”



“Naw I’m live uptown” Heavyn said. She started blushing so hard. That she turned beet red. TaQuita saw this in Heavyn and knew it was time to get her away from Devonte. She wasn’t a blocker Heavyn knew that Quita liked Devonte.


“Yea that right. She live to far from you” She said to Devonte while rolling her eyes “Heavyn we need to get goin cuz you know how ya moms be trippin when you late”


“Yea you right” She turned to Devonte and Jamel “It was nice meeting the two of you, hope to see you again” She gave a little wink and walked out.


“Yo homes is that you? Let me know now before I make a move” Devonte said while rubbing his hands together


“Um yea I was tryin to get wit her. We had the convo thing goin for a while” Jamel said. He was a little nervous because this was not the first time Davonte took a interest in one of his girls.



“Aight I aint gonna mess with it. Do you!” Devonte said as he walked away.



Sorry its so picture heavy. I got a little too excited when i was taking pictures. Stay tuned for more!!!

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