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#101 Old 25th Jun 2014 at 7:47 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 42. "No Longer Over the Hill"
Welcome back, to part 42.


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"No Longer Over the Hill"




Later that afternoon the Selkies had once again returned to visit Herb and Coral on Puma Isle.
Music was blasting from a small but powerful CD player.

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Everybody was having a great time and dancing.

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Then Coral started to feel strange. Like how she felt when she would do an age transition.
Coral got nervouse as the feeling got stronger and the crowd started to cheer as Sims do
at Birthday Parties.

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The fear of death came cold and icey upon Coral while she looked around at the cheering crowd.
Would this be her final age transition? She was already a Senior Citizen, her next age transition
would turn her into a ghost! Coral felt tears well up in her eyes as the colorful lights started to
swirl around her.



She was not ready to die yet, she wanted to see her daughter Brandy again, she wanted to go
home. Coral watched for Mr.Death but he was no where around. Coral heard the familiar sound
of age transition and was instantly turned into a Young Adult.

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She stood there with a shocked smile on her face. Unknown to her, all those magical showers
and drinking the healthy water from the spring had caught up to her. She was now officially a young
woman again. The Selkies politely laughed at the shocked look on Coral and Herbs face and explained
to them about the magic shower and drinking water.

The End of part 42.
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Test Subject
#102 Old 28th Jun 2014 at 9:20 PM
Hi Tasia,

This is a short but swee part. So, Coral is a young adult but Herb is still an elder. This could get interesting.

Looking forward to the next part.

LillyLeClaire
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#103 Old 10th Aug 2014 at 10:30 AM
Quote: Originally posted by LillyLeClaire
Hi Tasia,

This is a short but swee part. So, Coral is a young adult but Herb is still an elder. This could get interesting.

Looking forward to the next part.

LillyLeClaire


Hiya Lilly, thanks so much for leaving a comment. Yes, it was a short chapter. I have had tons of problems with my internet and phone service. Hopefully Monday I will get it fixed once and for all then get back to writing this.
LOL now that Coral is young again, King Sean will be even more interested in her. Muah haha ha..
Scholar
#104 Old 22nd Aug 2014 at 2:21 PM
Wow, what a great story! It improved soo much. Just wondering, is Herb still telling the story? And when are we going to get back to the Brokes? Also, does Coral go through a big age transition from here to when they're telling the story, because she's an elder when she gets back to the Brokes...
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#105 Old 12th Sep 2014 at 9:21 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 43. "Jealousy"

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Hi there, I am Grandpa Herb. I am also Brandy Broke's father. This story has been taking a long time to tell so I thought I would take this opportunity to catch everyone up to speed. We are actually all sitting around Brandy's kitchen table as I tell her and my grandson Dustin about the adventures that my lovely wife Coral and I have had over the last several years. A lot has happened, getting captured by the "Gotta Boogy tribe" kept us captive for nearly two years until Sheeta helped us to escape by causing a large diversion with a herd of stampeding elephants. Then a daring escape down a wild river, followed by nearly being trapped by a bunch of blood thirsty ancient Tikii Statues. The River Dolphins saved us from that situation and brought us to the beautiful Puma Isle. A magical place of protection also located in the middle of the Selkies territory who are determined to keep us among them as they need more people to join their tribe. The handsome king is seducing my wife and I am being distracted by a couple of very attractive selkie females. The biggest rule on Puma Isle is "No Fighting except to establish leadership." So now that we are all caught up. Lets get back to the story.

But it will have have to wait till tomorrow. Good Nite everybody.
Scholar
#106 Old 12th Sep 2014 at 3:51 PM
Hehe, thanks for that ^^
Test Subject
#107 Old 5th Oct 2014 at 5:00 AM
Very cool story
Lab Assistant
Original Poster
#108 Old 14th Oct 2014 at 6:20 AM
Quote: Originally posted by o0bubby
Very cool story

Thanks so much for your comment. I am posting a new chapter now..
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#109 Old 14th Oct 2014 at 7:50 AM
Default The Brand Broke Story. Part 43, Jealousy
Welcome back to part 43.

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"Jealousy"

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Corals new youthning was greatly admired by the selkies. King Sean took two quick strides on his long strong
muscular legs landing him in front of Coral. He held Coral's hand to his lips, kissed it and then explained to her
and Herb what had just happened.
After Coral and Herb fully understood what had happened; Coral decided it was time for a look in the mirror and
see what the new youth looked like. She was sure she would need a makeover as Coral was very particular about
her looks.

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Herb could not decide if he wanted to cheer or cry. Now his beautiful wife had her youth back and
he was still and old man. Coral had always been lovely but now she was once again the hottie that
he shamelessly had lusted after all through high school and pursued relentlessly in college until she
finally agreed to date him. He was very fortunate when they hit if off with two lightning bolts and she
later agreed to marry him.

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Coral went to look in the mirror and was pleased with her youthning, but hated her hair style and outfit.
Time for a make over. After trying several outfits, hairstyles and fixing her make up, Coral decided on a
new look and made her grand appearance. She was greeted by hoots and whistles of approval from the Selkies.

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"Lets Party!" someone cried out and the entire group agreed . The radio once again blasted and played a tune that
ones legs and feet could not ignore. Then everyone including Herb and his two new best friends Queen Ruby and Sarah
were soon dancing and having a blast. A keg of beer appeared and then the party really got going. Before things got
too fun. Herb cooked the fish and Coral sat out all of the fruit she had picked. It was a nice feast that Herb and Coral
provided. Everyone ate their fill.

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After dinner Queen Ruby and Sarah seduced poor Herb into helping with the dishes.

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Sarah could be very convincing.

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The remaining Selkies decided to go hunting and swim off the delicious dinner.

Leaving Coral alone with King Sean of the Selkies.

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"Would you care to take a stroll with me Coral? Offered King Sean. The moon is very lovely tonight.


The End Part 43
Field Researcher
#110 Old 14th Oct 2014 at 8:53 PM
When will we be back with the briefcase? I liked it better before...
Instructor
#111 Old 14th Oct 2014 at 9:14 PM
King Sean is a handsome sim !

Peace, Harmony & Balance... Libra is Love..
Scholar
#112 Old 21st Oct 2014 at 9:38 PM
Great, worth the wait!
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#113 Old 25th Oct 2014 at 8:09 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 44. "The Kitchen Table"
Welcome back, to part 44
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"The Kitchen Table"

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"Whew, mom, a romantic walk in the moonlight with the handsome king of the selkies? How did that go?
Did he kiss you?" Brandy teased while shooting her dad a questioning look.

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Grandpa Herb suddenly became very quiet and had a sad look on his face.

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Coral got a far away look in her eyes as she was deep in thought.

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" I think that grandma did get a kiss in the moonlight." Declared Dustin with a sly look.

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"Yeah, that was some stroll in the moonlight that she took alright!" Said Herb with a bit too much sharpness
in his voice that did not go unnoticed by anyone sitting at the table.

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"That rotten King Sean had been trying to steal my wife since the moment he
laid eyes on her." Grumbled Herb.

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Just then little Beau started fussing that he was done with his dinner and wanted to be let out.
Grandpa Herb stood up and retrieved his grandson from the high chair.

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"I think we both could use a nap after such a yummy meal," Herb told his grandson.
At the same time making it known to all that Herb wanted no part of the telling of this part of their story.
He would take Beau into Brandy's room and lay down with him on her bed until the little guy fell asleep.

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Even after Herb left and everybody heard the bedroom door close, Coral was still oddly quiet.


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"Mom? Mom are you OK" Brandy asked her gently

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Coral took another bite of food, as if stalling for time while she searched for just the right words to begin
telling her daughter and grandson about the moonlight walk by the river with the very handsome King Sean of the Selkies.

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"First I want to tell you both that I love my husband very much. We have been through a lot together."


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"But WOW was that King Sean was one handsome man! I was instantly attracted to him
from the moment I met him. Tall dark, handsome, and a body, a body that just was so perfect.
I have never met a man as beautiful as him." Coral announced enthusiastically.

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Coral got that dreamy look in her eye again. Apparently she had his memory
locked securely away to enjoy at her leisure.

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"Wow, grandma, sounds like you really had a thing for him."

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"Yes, Dustin, I did. As long as I was an old woman I felt safe from his attention. But when
I suddenly became young again from the magic water of Puma Isle; I was so invigorated
and attracted to him, that I nearly forgot myself. For me King Sean was the king of seduction
and desire.

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I will never forget him or that night." Coral took a deep breath and began to tell
Brandy and Dustin about that night with king.


The End part 44
Scholar
#114 Old 25th Oct 2014 at 5:11 PM
This is wonderful! Looks like Herb forgot about his adventures when he was a slave.
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#115 Old 25th Oct 2014 at 10:14 PM
Quote: Originally posted by IrishA03
This is wonderful! Looks like Herb forgot about his adventures when he was a slave.


Hi there Irish, thanks so much for reading my story and leaving a comment. Yes, I think Herb did forget his daily visits from Queen Hepshna for nearly a year, he is also very jealous. LOL he has good reason to be King Sean is very persuasive. I am working on the next chapter now.
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#117 Old 30th Dec 2014 at 9:11 PM
Quote: Originally posted by Kaiko Espurr Mikkusu
Also, Brandi is the daughter of Bob and Betty Newbie, not Herb and Coral Oldie (Davis) who are Mary-Sue Pleasant's adoptive parents.
But anyway, completely "EAxis-match" stories are a bit boring y'know? So yeah, you can continue the story if you want to.


Thanks for leaving a comment, I appreciate that. I already know all about Brandy Broke since she is the main character of "my" story. Stories are for who ever enjoys writing them or reading them y'know. So yeah, I do want to continue the story. Have a great day and Happy New Year .
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#119 Old 17th Jan 2015 at 6:03 PM
Quote: Originally posted by Kaiko Espurr Mikkusu
Her name is BrandI not BrandY... but maybe "Brandi Broke" and "Brandy Broke" are two completely different, yet similiar looking and similiarly named, people!


And your point is?
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