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Lab Assistant
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#1 Old 31st May 2016 at 10:22 PM
Default A chapter i wrote
Heres a chapter from my simpsons medival/victorian story saga: Under the light of the silver moon. Enjoy!

this story takes place in the ol' victorian days, you know, horse

drawn pickups, villagers, and evil creatures roaming around in the

forests across nearby towns and villages. now, Camilot and the known

flying reptiles with wings (no offense) dragons were at war, camilot was

using all the power they got to drive off the fire breathing creatures

now, a small family that lived in the woods, had a tragic past.

their father was killed in the start of the Dragon wars. right in front

of their daughter's eyes, now. the daughter and adopted son, Lisa and

Milhouse were sent out into the forest to go pick some fresh berries

for their mother, Marge. to make into her famous Blueberry pie.

"phew, you know lisa.. i'm getting a bit tired, can we stop for a bit?"

Milhouse asked, trying to catch his breath. "ok, sit down and rest,

don't worry i'll be back." Lisa said, handing Milhouse a jug of water.

Milhouse took off the cap and took a sip of it. he looked up to see Lisa

walking off into the forest, holding her wooden basket as she went.

Milhouse was about to get up to stop her, but he managed to stay calm,

and stay put but still, he had a hunch something might happen. Lisa

continued walking into the forest, looking around for any creatures that

might jump out and attack her. and possibly a berry bush to begin with.

she continued walking until she reached a large block of stone in her

path. she thought she noticed something carved in the stone. she walked

over to the stone and she was right, there were ancient runes carved in

the stone, she took out her handcrafted notepad and began to write down

the runes, translated in english, however, she was so distracted that

she didn't know she was being watched by something, a creature.. hiding

in the bushes behind her, the creature growled softly and began walking

towards her, however. the creature accidently stepped on a twig,

creating a loud SNAP! which caused Lisa to jump. "hello?" she asked,

shaking. looking around, nothing happened. she turned around and

continued writing in her notepad when all of a sudden, the creature roared

and leapt out and tackled her, she looked at the creature and breathed

heavily and whimpered, fighting the urge to scream. the creature had

brown fur covering it, the creature had pointed ears. the creature had

long black claws and worst of all.. the creature had white. sharp.

teeth. it looked at lisa, snarling beastly at her and looking right in

her eyes. when all of a sudden, the creature saw the scared look in

Lisa's eyes and the creature's eyes widened, the creature stood up,

which revealed that it was about Lisa's size. it looked at

her with a nervous look and then it said, "i'm so sorry.. i can't really

fight my instincts.. it often happens.." Lisa looked in the creature's

eyes and saw that the creature never meant to hurt her, she then asked the

creature a question, "w-what's your name?" the creature's nervous expression

slowly changed into a smile and it responded. "I'm Bart Simpson, who the

hell are you?"

Animating is tough, but once you get it done, its worth it for the views. and a full 5 stars of course.
 
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