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#26 Old 27th May 2013 at 7:41 AM Last edited by Tasia714 : 11th Sep 2014 at 9:38 PM.
Default The Brandy Broke Story, Part 5 Beau's Birthday Party

{Author's note: In this part Beau does have his birthday, but he will not
be transitioning into a sim kid. He will stay a toddler for a little longer.
Also thanks to two annoying and selfish people Cindalove and Nefertiti my many pictures in my story were deleted when these two religious nuts deleted my story from their crazy sims forum. If you post any stories on Simmers Garden be sure and back up all of you work because there is a good chance these two face skanks will delete your work if they decide you are not holy enough for there hideous site. Sorry about the inconvenience, once I finish writing this story I will go back and reshoot the pictures for this story. I am very thankful that Mod the Sims has not deleted my stories due to lack of pictures, thank you very much MTS. }





Welcome to Beau's Birthday Party!



Beau, of course, was happy to go and find his new blocks to
play with; another early Birthday present from Tasia and Turok.



He had plenty of other presents, but he had to wait until his actual
party to get the rest.




No matter, he was happy with the blocks for now.




Tasia of course, was one of the first to arrive and had been
busy getting decorations set up. Tasia does love a good party.



She got right to work as soon as she had arrived.



All Dustin had to do was move around the chairs and tables.
Tasia pretty much had everything under control.




So when Brandy went outside to see what still needed to be done...



... she found everything ready to go.



She was free to just mingle with the guests.




Dustin has made a new friend. She is very nice her name is Valery
Tucker. That handsome police officer behind her is her father.



She is new to the neighborhood and she does like Dustin.



They get along very well. Dustin and Valery are always joking
around with each other.



Brandy was busy talking to Jeremy Miles. He is also new to the
neighborhood. He and his daughter Sarah moved here from Montana to work
on the Double RR Ranch for Mr. John Maverick.




Jeremy Miles is one heck of a ranch hand; he has a special gift when it
comes to horses, and John Maverick noticed it right away while he was
buying horses on a local ranch in Montana. John made Jeremy a offer he
could not refuse.
Mr. Maverick even paid to move Jeremy's family to Pleasantville.
He and his daughter Sarah quickly found a very nice place to
live, just up the road from Brandy.



Jeremy and Sarah Miles were very nice people.(This is Sarah by the way)
I wonder if her and Valery will become friends...




... And they both seem to be interested in Dustin.




After everyone had plenty to eat from the buffet bar, Beau was
allowed to open up his other presents. Turok and Tasia gave him
this play stove. It does not work without the batteries, so it is
safe for him to play with until he is older.



Brandy got him this nice tricycle. She got it at a rummage sale and
asked Dustin to repaint it. It is a old tricycle but very well made. It
will last him a long time.



Beau's favorite gift was his new toy box full of toys, a gift from Brandy and Dustin.

















Soon it was time for the cake , everybody was ready , so Brandy
came to get Beau.




"Come on you little Booger Butt, come with Mommy, it's time for cake!"




"Cake! Cake!," said Beau.



He wiggled and squirmed in Brandy's arms with excitement.







"Are you ready for the Birthday Song?", Brandy asked Beau.
"Happy Birthday to you!," Brandy started the song off.




"Happy Birthday to you !"



"Happy Birthday, dear Beau!"




"Happy Birthday to you!"



Jeremy Miles was a very funny guy; he blew the horn the loudest
for Beau and Beau loved it.




Beau liked Jeremy right from the start. They were already buddies.



So, of course he was tickled that Jeremy was blowing that horn at him so loudly.





"Are you ready to blow out the candles?"



Yes, blow!" Beau yelled with excitement.






Beau was so excited that he blew out the candles.
He just hugged his mommy tightly for a moment.



"Brandy, your baby has magic powers," said a little girl that Brandy
did not know. She and the little boy had just showed up to the party
uninvited. Brandy had not made a big deal about it because there were
no other children at Beau's birthday party and they were really well
behaved children, so she had let them stay.



"We know your baby has magic powers because
we have them too," said the little boy.



"Ok kids, thank you for telling me that."
Brandy did not really want to listen to the
children; suddenly they were kinda giving her the creeps.




Being pregnant, Brandy needed to use the bathroom often and this
was one of those frequent times.
But she was kinda afraid to put Beau down after what those freaky
kids had said that to her.



Tasia noticed Brandy's hesitation.
"I will look after him Brandy. You
go and do what you need to do," said Tasia.
She recognized the pee-pee
dance her friend was doing.
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#27 Old 27th May 2013 at 9:36 AM
What nice parties you throw for your Sims! I never have the patience, haha. Your story is coming along nicely, and you're very good at rapid updates. Keep it up!
Test Subject
#28 Old 27th May 2013 at 9:32 PM
Congrats fitting such a nice deck on their tiny trailer lot. I like the addition.

I especially enjoyed chapter 4, the tax problems were a good way to set suspense for the next scene where you show that nurse apparently getting brutalized. I like that what is happening isn't entirely clear yet. You have more patience in storytelling than me.

The screenshots for the last few chapters were very well put together, and all the screenshots with Beau in them make me smile a little. Sims 2 toddlers are so emotive. You get all the good shots in this story, kudos.

I'm liking the story, and looking forward to reading more of what is happening. Good job.

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#29 Old 28th May 2013 at 8:09 AM
Quote: Originally posted by hmrnd3
What nice parties you throw for your Sims! I never have the patience, haha. Your story is coming along nicely, and you're very good at rapid updates. Keep it up!


Hi hmrnd3, Thank you so much. I used to throw terrible parties for my sims. I had to learn to use a few cheats to make them better. LOL! The Police always show up if the party goes on past 10pm how funny. Thank you so much for leaving a nice comment.
I am about to finish posting the rest of the Beau's Birthday, now that it is the middle of the night and I have the time. Such is the life of a writer aye. lol
Simcerly,
Tasia.
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#30 Old 28th May 2013 at 8:17 AM
Quote: Originally posted by Plumboob
Congrats fitting such a nice deck on their tiny trailer lot. I like the addition.

I especially enjoyed chapter 4, the tax problems were a good way to set suspense for the next scene where you show that nurse apparently getting brutalized. I like that what is happening isn't entirely clear yet. You have more patience in storytelling than me.

The screenshots for the last few chapters were very well put together, and all the screenshots with Beau in them make me smile a little. Sims 2 toddlers are so emotive. You get all the good shots in this story, kudos.

I'm liking the story, and looking forward to reading more of what is happening. Good job.


Hey Plumboob, thank you for reading and commenting. I am glad that you appreciate the suspense. LOL.
Have you ever read a Stephen King Novel? That guy can take forever to build suspense and bring his characters to life. I sometimes get frustrated reading his work but it always pays off in the end.
I love taking pictures of the toddlers, they are so cute and very much like real children when they play or act naughty.
The nurse that was brutalized has more to play in the story. I think you will be amused.
I will now go and post the rest of Beau's Birthday Party.
Simcerly,
Tasia.
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#31 Old 28th May 2013 at 10:18 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, Part 5 Beau's Birthday Party.(cont.)
Tasia noticed Brandy's hesitation.
"I will look after him Brandy. You go and do what you
need to do," said Tasia.
She recognized the pee-pee
dance her friend was doing.




"Thanks Tasia, I will be right back. Please keep a eye on him."



But no sooner did Brandy let go of Beau -




he disappeared, right into thin air in front of everyone............. He just vanished.........










'Oh great, this is all we need,' Dustin was thinking to himself, while
he looked around for his little brother. He was trying not to panic and
wondered if anyone else had noticed that his little brother had just
disappeared into thin air.





Brandy was surprisingly calm when Beau disappeared. She was
calm because the second that he disappeared, she found that she
could hear his thoughts in her head.




And she knew just where to find him.



There he is.
'How in the heck did you get all the way over here so
quickly Beau?' Brandy thought, as she calmly walked
over to her three year old.





"I flied Mommy!," said Beau, as he chewed on his car.



"Yes, you certainly did something", she thought in her head.
"Beau, can you hear Mommy?," she thought to her son.
"Yes, Mommy, I hear you."
"Beau, you scared Mommy. Please don't do that again," she thought
to him.
"OK Mommy, Beau no fly now," Beau thought back to her.



"Well, there's the little guy. He sure is a quick one," said Jeremy Miles.



"Come on, Valery. Let's go get some of that birthday cake; it looks
delicious."
Everybody else at the party seemed to think that was a good idea too,
and soon everybody was eating cake.




Nobody really seemed to notice that Beau had disappeared
and reappeared in a different place. It was like everyone had
kind of forgotten it, as soon as it happened.



The party just continued, as if nothing had happened, and nobody
thought anything was strange.



Beau went on being a normal, curious, little three year-old.



Jeremy was no fool and was very observant to certain situations,
and this was one of them.He made it a point to sit with the two children.
He had heard what they
said to Brandy and he wanted to know what they would tell him.
"We told Brandy that her baby has magic powers," said the little boy to Jeremy.
"Beau does too," said the little girl, as she climbed into her chair and settled
to eat the huge slice of cake.
"So you mean the baby in her belly has magic powers also?" asked Jeremy.
"Oh yes," said the little girl, "He is very special, but not the baby that is
dead. He is just dead." And then she started to eat her cake, just like
any other little girl at a birthday party.



Dustin and Sarah danced with each other for the next three songs.



Valery was noticeably getting a bit jealous.
"Val, are you ok?," her
father, Officer Tucker asked her. He knew she was interested in Dustin
and it was hard to watch her get jealous, before there was even anything
to be jealous about.




"I'm fine Dad," she said with large, round, blue eyes that told another story.




The party for the three year-old went so well, that it ran late into the night. The neighbors
complained, and the police showed up,and broke up the party. Rats! Just
when it was getting good, too.



"That was a great party," said Tasia, before she left. "I had a wonderful
time. Sorry Turok could not make it, but you know he had to work."
"No problem. Let him know that he was missed, and Beau loved the
gifts y'all gave him. Did you get a piece of cake for him?" asked Brandy.
"I sure did; that cake turned out really well. You are a very good cook," Tasia complimented her.
"Thank you, Tasia and thank you so much for all the work you did helping
to get everything ready for the party. You were a huge help."
"I love throwing parties. I will give you a call tomorrow," said Tasia,
and she gave her friend a hug goodbye.



------- The End of Part 5 ------

No CC by me. A thank you to all the creators! You guys are great!
Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoyed it. Part 6 is on its way, but
you all know I write slow, so please be patient.
Happy Simming.

{Author's note: Don't worry part 6 is already written.}
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#32 Old 28th May 2013 at 11:19 AM Last edited by Tasia714 : 6th Jun 2013 at 4:10 AM.
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 6
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This is the ghost of Skip Broke as he appears to Brandy.

Ok, on with the story,

Previously, we left Brandy after a wonderful and strange Birthday party for her toddler son Beau.

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Early the next morning after a restless nights sleep, Brandy awoke to
find Dustin her oldest son already up.
Dustin seemed to act like he needed to tell his mother something
important, but before Brandy could ask him , What was wrong? Dustin
burst out.
"Mom , I am sorry, I have to tell you this, but,, but"..... "Mom, I have been seeing visions of a ghost,
the ghost of Dad! I keep seeing him out of the k"

"Kitchen Window, and he is always reading the newspaper, Brandy
finished her son's sentence.
Dustin's eyes seemed to bulge in his head as he realized that his
mother had been seeing the same thing.
While her son was tongue tied, Brandy continued to say that,
she had been seeing ghostly visions of her missing husband
for months now.
She let Dustin know that she had told her best friend Tasia about
what she had been seeing.
Gradually, Dustin came out of shock from what his mother
had just said, a sense of relief rolled over him, relief that he was
not going crazy , he then tried to listened more closely to what his
mother was saying.

"They told me that he must have a message for us and that the
next time I see him, that I am to write down everything that
happened immediately."

"Dustin?" he heard his mother say, Dustin?
"Honey , look at mommy!" In a sort of shocked daze Dustin
looked at his mother.
"Honey, she said to her son, It's going to be okay, we
are going to make it through this. Were not crazy. Everything
is going to be alright.. OK?

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Suddenly, Dustin hugged his mother desperately and thankfully.

"Mom , he said to her, as he gave his mom a hug, I am so glad that I am not alone, I really thought I was losing my mind.

They both laughed as he hugged her because the baby in her belly kicked them both.
Your little brother wants to tell you he loves you to she laughed and then sobered.

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"I love you Dustin, I am glad that you are here with me, this would be so much harder alone.
You are a good son, I mean , not that I want you to have hard times, she choked back tears
and smiled at him.

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"Not that I want to have hard times either Mom, but, I would not want you to be here alone without me, we will
stick together and make it through all of this weirdness. "I love you mom!" You are right we will get through this."

Dustin could tell that his mother was very tired and needed to rest considering her condition. He suggested that
she go and take a nice bubble bath while he agreed to listen for his little toddler brother, Beau who was still asleep.

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So Brandy went to go and take a much anticipated bath. Lavender bath salts were added to the water
and she was ready to go for a soak.

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And Dustin decided to have a closer look at today's paper.He sat down and automatically turned the paper
to the exact middle and folded it in half.
"Ok, dad he thought in the back of his mind, "What is it that you want to show me?"
Ever so lightly the words became more bold as his thumb pointed to the same place that his fathers
ghostly figures had pointed to. IT was right there in front of him but yet he could not believe it .
The center of the paper was the classifieds. The add under his thumb read,.

Wanted: One Broken Brandy
Please apply in person for further information.
S.100 Salem Avenue between 1pm and 4pm .


Dustin's blood got cold at first , then the adrenaline quickly followed, but for some reason,
he had a very determined mind to remain perfectly calm as he re-read the add in the paper
that so obviously pointed to his mother. He was getting more paranoid as the seconds passed.
Maybe someone was watching him?
With this in mind, he calmly got up and went into the house.

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Dustin went to the computer and googled the address several times before he got a
phone number, it was as if the address did not exist or was changing all the time , which
of course made no sense, but he finally got a phone number and quickly dialed it.
Dustin held his breath as he listened to the phone service dial the phone number , holding his breath,
he secretly hoped to hear his fathers voice answer.

The phone range three times and then gave him the recorded message,

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"The number you have dialed is temporarily disconnected or no longer in use. "Please hang up
and dial again if you feel you have reached this message in error." brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
The dial tone rang in his ear. Beeep, beeep , beeeep , beeeep, Dustin was just standing there
listening to the noise from the phone as he started to feel stupid about everything. Stupid that he
admitted he even had a dad, his dad probably just left them.That's what most of the neighborhood
said about them. Just as he started to feel really bitter, the beeping sound stopped on the telephone.
A dial tone began, then the line started ringing.
Dustin gasped as someone picked up the phone on the third ring.
"Hello," a older male voice asked, Is this Dustin or Brandy Broke?

.............. The End of Part 6..........


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#33 Old 6th Jun 2013 at 6:48 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 7
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Welcome to Part 7 of the Brandy Broke Story.
"Previously"
Brandy and Dustin had admitted to each other that they both had
been seeing the ghost of Skip.
While Brandy went to go and take a nice warm bath, Dustin
sat down with the newspaper and found a very strange add.
He looked up the phone number and called it .
After the third ring a male voice answers the phone, he has a
accent that Dustin cannot immediately place, but he lets his
brain settle on a New Yorkish type tough guy accent.
"Hello?!" He heard the other voice speaking to him. He also heard
a sound that reminded him of fingers snapping. They sounded sharp
and crisp in his ear and it quickly got Dustin's attention. Then his
mind burst into action.
"Who is this?" he demanded. "And where is my father?"
"Whoa, slow down kid, you called me remember?"

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"My name for now is Mr. Grinch. I take it this is Dustin.
You sound just like your dad."
"Mr.Grinch, how do you know my dad?" Dustin asked carefully.
Mr. Grinch gave a light hearted chuckle. "Dustin I am a old
friend of your fathers. If you have been seeing visions of him and
found the add in the newspaper, that can only mean one thing
and dat is that yer dad is missing."
"Am I correct?" Mr.Grinch asked Dustin after a long silence.
"Yes, that is true, agreed Dustin. "Now can you please tell me
where he is?'
"Well, if you are calling this number than that information is
classified, but he has left you a message."
"Whats the message?" Dustin said eagerly into the phone.
"I can't tell you kid, because I don't know it."
"Then what can you tell me!" Dustin hissed at Mr.Grinch out of frustration.

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"Dustin, take your mother and go to the address in the
paper during the time indicated. When you get there sit down
and wait. Someone will show up," said Mr.Grinch.
"But !" Dustin interrupted in protest, Where is my dad?
My mother needs him, his family needs him. She is going to
have a baby soon!" Dustin tried to explain.
"Kid, I understand this probably really strange to you.
But you must keep a open mind and do what I told you. Believe me
your whole perception of the world is about to change drastically."
"Can you tell me anything else?" Dustin picked Mr.Grinch's brain
for more information.
Dustin heard Mr.Grinch take a deep breath and sigh. Then he said.
"Your dad is a "Hero" Dustin. He did not abandon
you and your family
. Good Luck."
"CLICK"
Dustin hung up the phone as his mind spun into action. He had
to tell mom as soon as possible but he needed her calm and sitting
down, her pregnancy was high risk and the stress had to be minimum.
Just then he heard Beau wake up and start to cry in his crib to be let out.

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While he was getting Beau dressed he called out to
Brandy, who was still in the bathtub.
"Hey mom?"
"Yeah?" Brandy hollered back.
"Beau is up now and I am going to make breakfast, what do
you want?" Dustin stood waiting with a half grin on his face because
he knew what she was going to say.
"Hmmm,,, that's a hard one Brandy teased, Hey, I know how about
some Peanutbutter Pancakes?"
"Could there be any other choice?" Dustin teased her.
"Not for a pregnant woman with cravings." Brandy teased back.
"Well Beau, I guess it is pancakes for breakfast."
"Pancakes," Beau said quickly as he gave a little jump on his brothers hip.

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After a vigorous breakfast of peanut butter pancakes
with Mrs.Butteries Maple syrup. Dustin began to tell his mom
about the conversation he had on the phone with Mr.Grinch.
She listened very calmly and had a happy look on her face.

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Brandy heard every word that Dustin said, but she could
hardly contain the joy and hope that she felt as she dared
to think that SKIP might actually come home to them.

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"Dustin that is GREAT news!" Your Dad might come home!" she shouted.

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"Even better, this is Monday! We can go today , she said
excitedly. What time is it?
"10:15am," Dustin told her.
"Perfect,Dustin you will have to miss school today."
"No school today mom, teachers inservice thingy."
"Even more perfect, I will go and call the nanny and go
and change my clothes.
"And while you are changing I will call a cab," Dustin added
excitedly and he stood up to let Beau out of his high chair.
"Great, and since we are on a budget, please find out how much it
is going to cost, we might have to take the bus back home,"
Brandy reminded him of their financial situation.
"Will do mom." Dustin agreed.
TO BE CONTINUED.
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#34 Old 6th Jun 2013 at 7:32 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 8 & 9
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"Welcome to part 8 of the Brandy Broke Story."

"Previously"

Dustin and Brandy were getting ready to go to the address in the newspaper.

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The Nanny arrived first, she was a quiet and kind hearted
woman, her lack of words never made you feel uncomfortable
or judged. She calmly cared for Beau and washed up the
breakfast dishes while Brandy and Dustin paced a hole in the
floor waiting for the cab to arrive.
Once the cab arrived Dustin and Brandy got a case of the nerves.
This was it! they were both thinking, they were at long
last going to get some answers to the disappearance of Skip Broke.
The ride in the cab downtown was made in a odd kind of silence
that did not seem to affect the smelly cab driver picking his
nose in the least.

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Finally they arrived at the address.
"That will be $15.35." stated the smelly cab driver.
Brandy paid the Cab driver and exited the cab with her son.
Both were glad for the fresh air.

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Dustin and Brandy found themselves in front of a very
Tall Department Store. They had both been in it
many times, but never past the first floor.

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End of part 8

Welcome back to part 9

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Brandy and Dustin stood outside the Department Store
and took a deep breath together, they faced a uncertain future.

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Once inside, Dustin asked the closest cashier for directions
to the address indicated.
"Oh yeah, said the young man, sure its up on the 5th floor.
That is one old Post Office, I think it has been here since
the building was built over 150 yrs ago. I am surprised that
anyone still uses the place. Just go back towards the stairs and
take the elevator. The stairs don't go up that far."
"Thank you very much," said Dustin. Then he and his mother
started off in the direction that the cashier pointed to.

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As soon as they approached the elevator, the doors slid open.
Brandy got in right away but Dustin hung back a little.
The reason was a very attractive blond haired young lady about
his age seemed to have a magnetic force about her, one that attracted
Dustin in a very STRONG way.
He could feel his heart pounding nearly out of his chest while
he and the young woman locked eyes.
"Are you coming Dustin?" Brandy asked her son, the doors of
the elevator starting to slide closed.
"Ahhh, yeah mom," Dustin answered with a smile on his face
and turning a little red. Normally he would of taken the next elevator
up; in order to hang back to talk to the young lady, but he knew that
this was not the time to be hitting on girls. "No matter how gorgeous
she is!" He quickly joined his very pregnant mother on the elevator.
Much to Dustin's surprise and happiness, the young woman was also
going up in the elevator. He felt like such a hero as he thrust his hand
into the doors to stop them from shutting allowing the young lovely to get
onto the elevator.
Brandy looked at the young woman with a friendly smile.
"What floor?" Brandy asked her nicely.
"The 5th floor thank you," the young woman answered in a
soft voice as gently and pleasant and a summer breeze.

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Dustin thought he heard music when she spoke. He could not
take his eyes off of her. He knew he was being rude, but he could
not help it. There was something so fantastic about this girl that it
blew him away. {He had it BAD.}

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Brandy had a huge smile on her face and pushed the button
for the 5th floor. The doors of the elevator slid smoothly closed.
She could tell that her son was in LOVE.
"Oh good, Brandy said, we are going to the 5th floor also."
"Do you shop here often?" Brandy persisted in a friendly voice.
Brandy was normally a very friendly person and people in general
found her easy to talk to.
"No and yes, the young woman replied with a enchanting smile,
my uncle works on the 5th the floor, I help him with whatever he
needs me to do. He should be here soon."
"That's great it's nice to have a job and make your own money," Brandy
encouraged the small talk.
"Yes, but, I have found that I like to spend money also," she flashed
another brilliant smile. I am afraid my paycheck has not yet made
it out of this building."
The elevator gave its normal lurch and drop when it reached its
final floor. The soft "ding" of the elevator announced there arrival.
While the doors slowly slid open the young beauty looked at Dustin and said.
"My name is Anna, its been nice talking to you and your mother."
"I'm Dustin," he finally managed to say and held out his hand to shake hers
politely.
"And this is my mother Brandy," Dustin introduced her to his mother.

Anna's named burned into Dustin's brain with each heartbeat.
Anna stepped out of the elevator followed by his mother.
Dustin floated out.

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Anna went to a nearby chair grabbed a magazine from a table,
sat down and began to read while she waited for her uncle to show up.

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Dustin and his mother found themselves in a very large room,
actually a entire floor that had been divided off sort of into different
sections of use.
They found themselves looking at a small office area that had windows
overlooking the park. The office was had no walls but the boundaries
were clearly defined by the owners unique interests.
Two empty chairs seemed to beckon them and there was really
no other place to sit except for the place that Anna had sat down
to wait for her Uncle to arrive.

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Dustin and Brandy sat down. Brandy being very pregnant
was happy for the place to sit down even though she had not
been on her feet for very long.
"Wow, This place is really neat," Dustin announced and
observed the place. The chairs had starting glowing a blue color
as soon as they sat in them.

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"Neat but weird" Brandy agreed with her son and
looked at the glowing chair she was sitting in.
They both looked around the small interesting office while
they sat and waited in attempt to distract themselves from
the excitement of not knowing what to expect next. The curious
objects around the office did not disappoint.

They were in the right place at the right time, but no one was
there except for the young woman that rode up in the elevator
with them.

Dustin reassured his mother that Mr.Grinch had told them to
sit down and wait, some one would show up.
"What time is it?" Brandy asked Dustin.
"Its 1:22 pm we are well within the time frame, we should be fine,
I just hope someone shows up before 4pm.
"Yeah me too, the suspense is killing me." Brandy stated the obvious.

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After about 20 minutes they heard the elevator coming up to
the 5th floor and finally the old shiny doors slowly slid open.
A older man with curly grey hair and glasses walked out.
He was well dressed and seemed a nice sort of fellow.

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"Hello Uncle Max," said Anna looking up from the magazine
she had been reading.



The End of Part 9.

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#35 Old 6th Jun 2013 at 8:06 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 10
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Welcome to Part 10 of the Brandy Broke Story.

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We find Brandy and Dustin waiting in the eccentric office of somebody, waiting for someone they
do not know.They are not even certain if anyone is going to show up.
When the elevator doors open and the nicely dressed older man walked out they each give a small
jump in their seats and stare wide eyed listening to the conversation that happens between the man and Anna.
"Hello Anna, he returned the warm greeting from his niece, I will need you to help me with some files
on my computer today he told her and walked towards Dustin and Brandy.

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"Uhmm,,,, Uhmmmm Dustin kept mumbling as he noticed that the beautiful blond
haired young woman now had green hair and green skin. She even seemed a
little older. Dustin was confused.

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" Anna caught Dustin's eye for just a moment then she shyly looked away. Even though she looked
very different, she was still gorgeous Dustin observed and for the split second that their eyes
were allowed to meet, he could tell that it was indeed the very same young woman that he and his
mother had shared the elevator with just 20 minutes ago.

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The phone conversation with Mr.Grinch came flooding back into Dustins head. "Your perception of the
world is going to change drastically and very quickly Kid."
"Hello, Hello," The well dressed man greeted them cheerfully and strode across the room to his desk.

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'Dustin and Brandy found themselves speechless while the man took his seat behind the desk.
"Good afternoon, the man attempted conversation again. And settled in behind his desk.
"My name is Mr.Lottery and you are?"

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"WHOA!!!!!!!!! Your eyes are so coool!" Brandon burst out.

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"Dustin!" Brandy scolded her son for his rude manners.
"Oh, but they are purple," agreed Mr.Lottery entirely un-offended. This color is
common in my family. He leaned forward to let Brandy and Dustin get a better look at his
purple starry colored eyes.

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"I take it you are Brandy and Dustin Broke ?" Mr.Lottery concluded.
"Yes, agreed Brandy, that is who we are."
"Good, good and very well," Mr.Lottery said cheerfully, we have been waiting for you."
"Mrs. Broke, your husband has left something here for you at this very old post office.
I am sure you are both very interested to know what it is?"

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"Yes, please," Brandy pleaded. My son here says that we have a message from my husband,
he has been missing for almost a year."
"That is all true, and we are going to get to that in just a moment but first we I have to tell
you a few things." replied Mr.Lottery.

The End of Part 10.


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#36 Old 7th Jun 2013 at 6:55 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 11-12
Special thanks (again) to Cindalove. Thank you for all of your help.



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Yes, we have already met, anyway I think we have? We rode up in the elevator together right? asked Brandy.
"Yes, it was me," replied Anna shyly.
"Now if you will just hold out your hand Dustin, Mr.Lottery asked him, I will scan your DNA, it wont hurt to much," he said with a grin.
That Mr.Lottery was such a kidder.
Dustin held out his hand and heard a high pitch sound for a moment as Mr.Lottery waved the device over his hand. Then the small machine beeped and turned light blue for a moment.
"Ah we have a match," Skip Broke is indeed your father.
Next he moved over to Brandy who seemed hesitant to let him scan her hand , she rubbed them protectively over her pregnant belly.
"Have no fear Mrs.Broke, this device will not harm your unborn child, it only tastes your blood quickly." Mr.Lottery said with a small tender smile.
"Oh, OK Brandy said with a little hesitation and held out her hand to be scanned .
Mr.Lottery scanned her hand,she also heard a high pitched sound for a moment as the small device tasted her blood as Mr.Lottery had said.
Then the device turned red followed by a short burst of light blue.
"Good, the red light agrees that you are indeed Mrs.Brandy Broke and the blue light tells us that your babies father is Skip Broke."

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"Well that is good news, laughed Brandy.
"Now Mr.Lottery could you please tell my son and I why your niece is green.?"
"Ah , I thought you could see her differently. That is part of Anna's talent , she only reveals her true appearance when she truly trust's someone or in our case is really attracted to someone, and by that I mean your son Dustin here.
"Ok, but why does she turn green?" Brandy persisted.
"Please forgive me if I seem evasive. It is not my intention. But the truth is , Anna is not entirely human. She is half Vanootian. Her father is human and her mother is from the peaceful planet Vanoota. She has the ability to change her appearance from human to Vanootian. It is a very admirable talent.
"That is amazing, agreed Brandy, finding herself very grateful that she was sitting down.
"I was not aware that there even was a Vanoonta," Brandy continued.

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"Mom, I think this is what Mr.Grinch on the telephone meant when he said that our perception and understanding of the world is going to change Drastically."
Dustin personally had no problem with Anna being green, he was totally infatuated with her and was in no way uninterested just because of a little thing like her being green and only half human.
Brandy seemed to inhale deeply for a moment and just kind of absorbed things, and when she exhaled she found that she actually was very ok with it . And was not suprised at all for some reason.

"Well, if everyone one is ready, here is your key," said Mr. Lottery and he handed Brandy a very simple looking tiny skeleton key, but when she looked at it a little more closely she could see that there were tiny lights moving around in it. Like how the glitter moves around inside of a snow globe when shaken.
"Your box number is F 921, if you will follow Anna she will show you the way."
"Thank you , Mr.Lottery for all of your ahhh help," Brandy said as she tried to pry herself from the chair unsuccessfully.
Mr.Lottery was close by and quickly held out a hand to help her up. When Brandy touched Mr.Lottery's hand it felt warm and comforting, and he effortlessly helped her up. Mr. Lottery works out.
"You are welcome Mrs. Broke , I hope to see you again. He smiled at her and looked in the direction of Dustin and Anna who were looking at eachother intently.
"Now remember once the box is open , remove your contents and leave right away, only view the contents in the privacy of your home with the windows shut , doors locked and curtains drawn. It is very very impotant that you do everthing I say.
He put his hand on Brandy's shoulder gentley as he said this last bit to her.
It reinforced it to Brandy and Dustin how important it was for them to do exactly as he instructed.
"Now if you will follow Anna, she will show you the way."

"Follow me ," said Anna.
Dustin did not have to be asked twice."This place is much bigger than it looks," Brandy commented after a long walk down a main corridor followed by a few turns.
"Yes, it would be easy to get lost in here even with a map," agreed Dustin.
Finally Anna stopped in front of a mail box marked F921, the other boxes surrounding it were not marked in any way, you could not see a key hole on any sort on the others either.
"Here you are, just use your key. Once you have the contents, please be sure and check carefully that nothing else is inside, your key will only open this lock one time. When you are finished, I will lead you back to the elevator," and then she stepped around the corner to give them some privacy.
"Ok mom, lets do this."
"Here we go," Brandy said as she put the key into the locked box. It seemed to stick at first, almost like the key hole was tasting the key and then they heard a lock pop and the door to the box opened.
When the door opened Brandy got a huge smile on her face for a moment she thought she could smell the scent of her husbands aftershave.
There inside the now unlocked box was a very plane almost tattered looking brief case.
Dustin grabbed a hold of the handle and took it out. Then he gave a look around inside of the box to make sure there was nothing else inside. It was empty , he looked twice and felt with his hand also all around inside of the Post Office Box.
"Ok mom , I don't see or feel anything else in there, should I close it?"
"If you are sure we have it all, yes," said Brandy.
Dustin reached out and closed the Post Office Box door, they both watched intently as it made a loud and final latching sound. Then the key that was still stuck in the lock,just disappeared.
"Yeah, I think I am ready to go home now ," said Brandy sounding tired and wierded out from the day.
Dustin peeked around the corner at Anna who made his day when she smiled at him and told her that they were ready to go.
They followed Anna back out through the maze of unmarked post office boxes and soon found themselves back at the elevator.

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Dustin once again stepped into the elevator; feeling dreadful at the thought of losing touch with Anna.
But much to Dustin's delight once again Anna who had changed back to her human form joined them in the elevator. He had 5 floors to get her ph #.

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To be continued.
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#37 Old 7th Jun 2013 at 7:07 AM
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Brandy and Dustin took the elevator back down to the main floor with Anna.
Brandy left Dustin with the brief case to say good bye to Anna for a moment while she went to go and call the cab.

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Dustin got Anna's phone number and he gave her his.
A cab must of been very close by ,because it only took about 3 minutes before a cab showed up.
Dustin took one last look at Anna as she stood outside the front doors of the deparment store and watched him leave.
Dustin started to smile again at how amazing she was , just a moment ago she was a lovely blond haired beauty and now as he looked at her while leaving, he saw her a lovely green skinned woman.
Anna smiled at him and waved as he got into the cab and looked out the window , of cource she had changed back to her lovely human form.

They made the cab ride home safe and sound.

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Brandy had wanted to shut the curtains and examine the brief case as soon as she walked through the door. But nanny had to leave as soon as Brandy got home and Dustin was called into work shortly after, then the phone would not stop ringing and Beau was being fussy and clingy.
Finally Brandy got a chance to change into the ugly but comfortable maternity clothes.
She was about to sit down when the phone rang again.
"Hello," Brandy answered the phone.
"Hi Sweetheart!!!!!!!!!! I've been trying to call you all afternoon!""

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************** Mom?! *****************
"Mom is it really you ?"
"Yes its me sweetheart, said the pleased voice on the other end.
"Mom where have you been? I have not heard from you or dad in nearly 2 yrs..Brandy sobbed in excitement.
"We have been held captive in Africa and have only recently been freed." her mother replied.
"Mom where are you?"
"I can't talk now sweetheart, our plane is about to leave , we should be to your house by around 3pm tomorrow. I've got to go for now sweetheart," The plane is leaving. I will explain everything when we get there..
"OK mom, I love you .
"I love you to, see you soon.

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Brandy finally got Beau to calm down and the phone stopped ringing after the exciting news.
Brandy locked the briefcase in the family safe in the closet for now. Brandy wanted to wait for Dustin to be there anyway. Plus she did not think she could take any more surprises today.
Brandy was very tired and layed down with Beau and they both slept the rest of the afternoon.
Then she was woken up by the door bell ringing.
"Good Evening Mrs.Broke. I am Tom Collins from Lowell's Hardware store. We had a appointment this evening to talk about possible filming dates for the commercial?" he said politely.

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"Oh yes, sigh.. I am so sorry , it has been a very long week I totally forgot about this evening.

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"WOW , I bet it has been a long week for you. Your belly is as big as the full moon.
"Im sorry maam if I am being rude, but my sister is about to have her first baby and she is due any day now, it will be the first baby boy born in my family in a long time."
"Its alright," said Brandy. You sound very excited, congratulations!
But If you don't mind, could we please reschedule this whole thing for say, in about 4 weeks?

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"Sure , said Tom with understanding. But I will have to pin you down on a date in 4 weeks."
"Oh you are a dear, thank you so much, I really appreciate it."
"No problem little lady, I will look forward to seeing you and the baby in 4 weeks. Tom Collins gave her a smile and a wink. Was he actually flirting with her??
"Good night now, and thanks again." said Brandy as she went back into the house and closed the door behind her. She was still tired and went back to bed since Beau was still sound asleep.
To be continued.
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#38 Old 7th Jun 2013 at 7:35 AM
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Welcome back to part 14-16 of the Brandy Broke Story.

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When Coral Davis looked her only child in the eyes, she just hugged her more closely again.
Brandy sobbed in her mothers arms for joy and stress relief.
"I am so glad you are here!"she cried into her mothers shoulder soaking it with tears.
"I'm here now honey, I am so sorry we have been gone for so long, her mother cried for joy right back at her.

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Brandy's dad Herb Davis, finally managed to park the car and get out
to greet his only child after such a long absence in her life.

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"Dad, I have missed you so much !" Brandy said as she received her fathers hug. He looked not much older than the last time she had seen him , he was in his late 70's now. When he hugged her, she felt not fragility or weakness in him, but muscles and a mutual gratitude to be in each others arms again. Herb had missed his daughter and for a long time, he thought that he would never see her again. And tears streaked down his face.

The End of part 14 and 15.

{Authors Note: Yup, that was a short two chapters. I was really struggling to learn how to upload a story when I wrote this. Ts2.com made it very easy to upload from the game to the site. It took me a long time to get this far. lol Thanks for your patience}

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"Welcome to part 16 of the Brandy Broke Story"

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"My sweet little girl, I have missed you so much," her father trembled a bit during the emotional moment.

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It was a happy reunion and they both had so much to tell each other.

Herb went to go and park the car, and Brandy and Coral went into the house.
Beau was standing in the doorway crying for mommy. It made Coral laugh to meet her
2nd grandson for the first time this way.

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Herb got the car parked and noticed the school bus coming up the road.

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"""""""""""""Grandpa?!""""""""""""

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"Hiya Dustin, how is my oldest Grandson?"

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" Fine! And How Is my Oldest Grandpa?" They shared the inside
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"We are so glad you are here Grandpa, mom and I really need you right now."
"Well, lets go inside and catch up on old times and new times," suggested Grandpa Herb.

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Grandma Coral was already in the Kitchen. Brandy was busy with
Beau who needed a quick bath, he could not get to his potty
chair in time and had a messy accident.
Coral was a chef in the kitchen she could make plain old
scrambled eggs taste like heaven.

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Brandy came into the kitchen with Beau all clean and excited to be done with his bath.
"So when does Skip get off work?, Coral asked Brandy while she busied herself in the kitchen. "I know Herb is just dying to talk to him and catch up on things."
"Oh, never mind, I see him now," said Coral while looking out of the window.

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"Hello Skip," Coral waved to him from the window.
When Skip suddenly disappeared, Coral hardly batted a eye.
" Brandy, where is your husband?" She asked her daughter in a curious tone.
"I wish I knew mom, he has been missing for 8 months now," Brandy sobbed. She was sitting at the kitchen table and combing Beau's hair. He was squirming and wiggling and finally got away. Brandy was combing too hard and was distracted.
Coral stopped what she was doing and went to go and comfort her daughter.
"What has happened?" She hugged Brandy and found herself choking up with tears seeing her daughter in so much emotional pain.
"Hold on honey , I need to get your dad so you can tell us both at the same time."
Coral found Dustin and Herb on their way in. When Herb looked at Coral's face he knew immediately something was wrong. Dustin also knew by the look on his Grandmothers face that it was time for a Family Meeting.
Dustin hugged his mother who looked a emotional wreck and gave her a nice squeeze as he greeted her.
They all sat around the kitchen table and Brandy and Dustin began to tell them all about the last 8 months.
How one day Skip just never came home from work.They never suspected foul play because everybody liked Skip.
Brandy did not suspect a lover because everything was fine between them.
"But what about the ghost of Skip, I just seen him by the window? Have you seen him too?" asked Coral.
"When Skip brings the paper?" Coral pursued her question with raised eyebrows and crossed arms.
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"Grandma, you seen him to?"
"Ah, so you have seen him," Coral declared. "How about you Brandy?" she asked her daughter.
Brandy shook her head yes, and took a sip of the hot tea her mother had just given her.
"I feel left out," complained Herb lightening the mood. "Well, Skip is my favorite son-in-law and I should of been the first to see his ghost. Hmmpp he crossed his arms.
Brandy felt the baby kicking inside of her and she remembered another thing she needed to tell her mother.
Both Herb and Coral were moved to tears as Brandy told them of the complications with the twins that she was pregnant with. Brandy tried not to think about that fact that inside of her, one of her babies was dead.
Brandy made it clear to her mother and father that she was concentrating on the living twin and trying not to think about its non living sibling. Much to Brandy and Dustin's relief Coral and Herb said they would help out with what ever needed to be done when the time comes.

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Beau was playing with his red fire truck down by his Grandpa's feet. Herb reached down to touch the top of his Grandson Beau's head and Beau suddenly disappeared and reappeared over by the T.V.
"Fast little guy aint he?" Grandpa Herb laughed to Dustin.
"I bet he keeps the nanny on her toes," Herb laughed some more.

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"Brandy honey, is there anything else that you need to tell us?" Coral asked her daughter.

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"Did I forget to tell you that Beau can tela-port himself where ever he wants and communicates with me telepathically?"


To be continued.



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#39 Old 7th Jun 2013 at 8:12 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 17-19
The Brandy Broke Story, Part 17
November 30, 2011





Welcome back to the Brandy Broke Story, Part 17-19



"Mom, are you ok?" Brandy asked her mother, who seemed to be deep in thought. "Yes dear, I hear you. It's just that you have grown up so fast. It seems like just yesterday that you were 16 yrs old and going off to boarding school in England. And now here you are all of a sudden with two kids and twi- ah a new baby on the way."
Just then the doorbell rang."Knock Knock!" Brandy heard the voice of her best friend Tasia say from the front door. Brandy had called her the night before, about her mother and father coming into town to visit. She invited Tasia to come and meet Herb and Coral Davis, Brandy's Parents.
"Come in!" Brandy said loudly, and she started to get up from her chair at
the kitchen table. But as soon as she stood up straight, she felt a
terrible pain in her back and sides. Then the feeling of warm water going
down her legs as if she was wetting her pants. When Tasia walked into the house, Brandy let out a loud yell, "Ohhhhhhh!" and she grabbed her pregnant belly in pain. A strong contraction hitting her.



"Oh my gosh Brandy!" Tasia shouted,
and rushed across the room to help her friend sit down before she collapsed on the floor.
"Dustin hurry and call 911! Your mom is having the babies now."
Brandy caught her breath after the first hard contraction.The pain stopped for 5 minutes, and Brandy took this opportunity to introduce
Tasia to her parents, and tell her son Dustin where her suitcase for the
hospital was, and also the new baby's suitcase. Both were located in the
closet in her bedroom, next to the safe.




"Yes," Dustin shouted into the phone, "My mom is having her baby now! Please send the ambulance. She is
high risk and you need to contact her doctor. His name is Dr. Stan Banks. Yes, at Pleasantville General Hospital. Yes, please tell them to hurry,"
Dustin pleaded with the 911 operator.



Officer Sexy Pants just happened to be in the area, and heard the
call and rushed to the aid of his friends
the Broke family.



But all to soon another strong contraction hit her, sending Brandy into
serious pain. She needed to get to the hospital now. She was a high
risk pregnancy and complications were imminent.




Dustin watched his mother suffer in
labor, and witnessed her pant's legs first become wet, and then turn red
as she started bleeding. Helplessly, he watched his mother turn very
pale. She too, had realized that she was bleeding and that she and the baby
were in very great danger.

At that moment Dustin prayed to God - for God to get that ambulance here
and save his mother.

To be continued...

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#40 Old 7th Jun 2013 at 9:31 AM
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Subject: The Brandy Broke Story, Part 20, 21 & 22 Tue Jul 10, 2012 10:16 pm
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{Special thanks again to Cindalove who convinced me to save this story and did a great deal to help preserve it. It has been bounced around from site to site and without her help many chapters would be missing. I am very very grateful.}

The Brandy Broke Story, Part 20
December 2, 2011



Welcome back.



Brandy felt she was in another nightmare as she was whisked down a long corridoor to get to the Emergency Operating room. She vaguely remembers voices, and then fights to regain consciousness. Then blackness. Brandy was just out. She sees a sharp bright light and focuses on it. Brandy hears a loud "snap". She knows she wants to wake up. She listens to for the sound again. "snap"

This time Brandy wakes up.



It was the sound of a small baby crying, and a monitor of some kind going off loudly. Next, the sound of someone rushing into the room. Brandy still could not open her eyes, so she just lay and listened, letting the sound help to bring her around.




Brandy managed to turn her head towards the sound in the room, and slowly cracked open her eyes.




"Have we got a messy diaper, little one?" she heard a kind and gentle voice say, to the baby. Brandy watched quietly, as she fought to wake up from the pain killers that she was on. *Click!* she heard the sound of the crib sliding back into place, and that brought Brandy fully awake.






The nurse, tending to the baby, heard
Brandy stirring.
"Well, welcome back Brandy," said the nurse, in a very friendly voice.
"Oh!" Brandy cried, as she tried to move her legs.
"I'm Nurse Maggie. How are you feeling Brandy?"
"Sore," Brandy murmured, with a dry throat.
"Would you like some water?" Nurse Maggie asked.
"Yes, please." replied Brandy.
Nurse Maggie poured her some water into a clear plastic cup from a tan
plastic pitcher, sitting on the night stand. She helped Brandy sit up and
handed her the cup.
After Brandy took a good long drink, and settled back onto the hospital
bed, Nurse Maggie asked Brandy how her pain was, and then administered her next
dose of pain meds.
"Well, do you think you are ready to hold your baby?"
"Oh yes," Brandy said with tears in her eyes.





"He really is a very beautiful
baby," Nurse Maggy told Brandy, and gently handed over Brandy's newborn son.
The first time Brandy held her baby she felt a strong sense of warmth go
through her body. This feeling would be called love. Then she looked
into his tiny face and saw that he looked exactly like his father Skip.
"Welcome to the world little one, she said as she held her son in her
arms for the very first time. Skip Jr. looked right at her and smiled,
followed by a nice, long, newborn baby yawn, then he settled back to sleep
in his mothers arms.



Brandy remembers asking Nurse Maggie to take her son back to the crib.
The pain killers were kicking in, and she really wanted to go back to sleep.
Just before the nurse dimmed the lights for Brandy and the baby, she told Brandy her family said they would be back in the morning.
"What time is it?" Brandy asked as she yawned.
"1:30 am. Get some rest."

The next morning, Brandy woke up to another nurse tending to her newborn son, Skip Jr.




"Good morning Brandy," said the nurse.
"Good morning. How are you today?" Brandy answered cheerfully.
"Good, thank you. I am Nurse Gretchen. How are you feeling?"
"Hungry," Brandy said, as they both heard her stomach growl loudly.
Well then, let's get you some breakfast."
"How is my baby?" Brandy asked.
"Cute as a button," replied Nurse Gretchen.
"Your doctor is on his rounds and should be in to see you in the next hour or so. Would you like to hold your baby while I go and order your breakfast?"
"Yes, but first I think I need to get to the bathroom." Nurse Gretchen helped Brandy get out of bed and make it to the bathroom.




When she made her way back to her bed, she had the pleasant surprise to find Dustin waiting for her.
"Hi Mom." He gave her a cheerful kiss on the cheek. Nurse Gretchen helped her back to bed.






"Ok, so are you ready to hold your baby while I go and order your breakfast?"
Nurse Gretchen asked brightly.
"That sounds great ," replied Brandy.










"Here is your Mommy big guy. Take good care of her now," Nurse Gretchen told Skip Jr. and she handed him over to Brandy.
"He really is a beautiful baby."
"Thank you,"said Brandy.



Dustin decided it was his turn to hold the baby, and then there was knock at the door.
Dr. Banks entered her room.




"Good morning, Brandy, Dustin," Dr. Banks said cheerfully, while entering the room.
"You look like you are feeling better than last night," he said with a smile.
"Yes, thank you doctor. I am so glad that you were already here when the ambulance arrived."



To be continued...

{Oh man, I was just getting to my favorite part. But I am out of time. I will come back later and post the rest..smile..}
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#41 Old 7th Jun 2013 at 6:56 PM
I have never been so sucked into a story! Good job again! Can't wait till next part!

Formally known as TotallySimsCrazy. Still addicted to custom content.
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#42 Old 7th Jun 2013 at 8:04 PM
Quote: Originally posted by TotallySimsCrazy
I have never been so sucked into a story! Good job again! Can't wait till next part!


Hi there, that is great news. And Thank You! I think you are really going to like the next few chapters. They are some of my favorites in this story. I can't wait to hear what you think.
Simcerely
Tasia.
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#43 Old 8th Jun 2013 at 1:57 AM
"Brandi Broke", I thought -booooring. NOT! This is so excellent! Love everything about this, and am caught up in the drama. Is the other baby really dead? What is it about Skip that his children are "special", and HOW are they special? Will Skip come home? And what about Brandi's parents being kidnapped in Africa?!

Stand up, speak out. Just not to me..
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#44 Old 8th Jun 2013 at 5:42 AM
Quote: Originally posted by grammapat
"Brandi Broke", I thought -booooring. NOT! This is so excellent! Love everything about this, and am caught up in the drama. Is the other baby really dead? What is it about Skip that his children are "special", and HOW are they special? Will Skip come home? And what about Brandi's parents being kidnapped in Africa?!


Hi there Grammapat, I am so pleased that you like my story and do not find it boring.....SMILE....
As as writer feedback from a reader is golden especially when they say all the fine things that you have said.
Yes, the other baby really is dead, but I cant tell you more than that; I don't want to ruin the surprise.
I have all but the ending written. I mean, I have the ending written in a notebook. I will be posting some exciting chapters tonight. I will be very interested to hear what you think of them.
Thanks again for you great comments.

Simcerely,
Tasia.
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#45 Old 8th Jun 2013 at 7:26 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 21
The Brandy Broke Story, Part 21
December 2, 2011



Welcome back.




After Dr. Brooks looked over her
charts, he told Brandy that he needed to look at her incision.
Dustin having no stomach for that sort of thing placed his little
brother back in the crib and left the room, so that Dr. Brooks could
examine his patient. "The incision looks good," he told her, he
continued to examined his work. Brandy felt nauseated for a moment
while she had thoughts about getting sliced open for a emergency
C-Section, and all of her guts hanging out.
None to soon, Dr. Brooks pulled her hospital robe back into place.



"Looks like we have a healthy baby and a healthy mother." Dr. Brooks
announced. Brandy could feel that he was leading to something that he
did not really want to say to her, and much to his relief she figured it out.
"You want to know if I want to see my other baby don't you," Brandy asked
with a lump in her throat.
"Yes, that is a matter that needs to be addressed as soon as possible,"
Dr. Brooks agreed.
"What did the baby look like?" Brandy asked him.
"The baby had not completely formed yet, and would not of survived.
The twin had a head and the beginning of a torso, lots of hair on the
head and 3 teeth."
Brandy felt uneasy and sick to her stomach again.
She found that she needed to stand up and breath a bit of fresh
air by the window.




It had rained sometime earlier that morning, and the air was crisp
and fresh. Brandy took a deep breath and felt revived from the cool,
fresh air. She made her decision, faced Dr. Brooks and told him no,
that she did not want to see the baby. His description was enough,
and seeing her baby that way would hurt her heart to much.
Dr. Brooks was very understanding as he listened to Brandy, who had tears
streaming down her while she told him how she felt.
"Thank you, Dr. Brooks for being there when I needed you most."



Dr. Brooks accepted Brandy's embrace, willingly. Brandy was one of
those patients that he would never forget. And maybe he did not want
to let her go as he hugged her back.



Brandy inhaled the scent of Dr. Brook's aftershave, while she hugged
him. It was very nice. And it was then that she knew she had better get
back into bed; she had no time for romance. She found herself appreciating
the scent of him and his embrace, none the less though. 'Or maybe
its just the drugs', she thought to herself.




Just after Brandy lay back down in the hospital bed, Nurse Gretchen
entered the room. "Oh, Good morning Dr.Brooks. I see you have found
my favorite patient for the day."



Dr. Brooks seemed kind of squirmy for a moment. He was thinking
of how much he really agreed with Nurse Gretchen's statement, but
quickly composed himself.



Then Dustin came back into the room, and insisted that he get a
picture of Dr.Brooks holding the baby. Of course, Nurse Gretchen
was more than willing to help out, and quickly handed Dr.Brooks
baby Skip Jr. " Say Cheese," Dustin told him.
"Dustin, now I would like a picture of Dr.Brooks and I. Also, one of Nurse
Gretchen and I", Brandy requested nicely.





Nurse Gretchen was more than willing to cooperate for the photo opts.



After at least twenty pictures, Dr. Brooks gave his final doctor's orders
for Brandy. She would have to stay in the hospital for two more days
and then she could go home if all was going well. Also, that a Counselor
from the hospital would visit her later, and that he would check in on her in the morning.
"Goodbye doctor!" Brandy and Dustin called after him as he returned to
his rounds.



Brandy enjoyed a nice, yummy, hospital breakfast, and sat talking
with her son, Dustin, awhile. Dustin had brought Brandy's suitcases
to the hospital that morning.



Dustin looked at her with a serious look and told her that when
he went to get her suitcases out of the closet, that it was very cold
inside. He had put his hand on the safe that held his father's mysterious
brief case, and it was cold like it had been in the refrigerator.
"As soon as I get home son, we will close the curtains and lock the
doors as requested and see what is in your father's brief case that
demands such secrecy."
Brandy was about to say more, but just then there was another knock
on the door.



"Come in," Dustin answered.



"Grandpa!" Dustin greeted him with a hug. "Where is Grandma?" he
asked right away.
"She is out in the lobby waiting for you; she needs help bringing in
all the flowers and balloons she just bought."
"Hi, Dad," said Brandy.
"Hi sweetheart," he gave his only daughter a kiss on the cheek.
"You look a HELL of a lot better than you did yesterday."
Brandy giggled."Thanks, dad."



Nurse Gretchen came back into the room to take Brandy's blood pressure
and vitals. When she walked in, Brandy greeted her and introduced her to
her father Herb Davis.
"How wonderful, he is just in time to change the baby's diaper
for me, while I take your vitals."



"No, I don't think so," Grandpa refused.



"No dirty diapers for me. Ask his Grandma, she will be here in a
minute. She just loves to change dirty diapers," he exaggerated
dramatically.



"Whats that Herb?" said Coral Davis, Brandy's mom, entering the room.
"Are you trying to convince this nice young lady to change your diapers too?"
Brandy and Nurse Gretchen burst out laughing, causing Brandy to hold
her stomach, where she had her stitches. Even though laughter is very
good medicine, this dose did come at a price. "Ouch!"




"You women always stick together against us poor men," he laughed.

To be continued...
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#46 Old 8th Jun 2013 at 8:43 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 22
The Brandy Broke Story, Part 22
December 5, 2011




Welcome back.




Back at Pleasantville Memorial Hospital...



Tasia arrived around 10am to visit her friend Brandy. Tasia was a
late sleeper and this was actually early for her, considering she had
to get up at 8am to get ready and include travel time.
"Excuse me please," she said to the young nurses aid at the information
desk.
"Yes ma'am, how may I help you?" The young woman said rather shakily,
like she was worried about something terrible.
"I would like to know what room my friend Brandy Broke is in? She
should be in the Maternity ward."
The young woman checked quickly on her computer and said "Yes, your
friend is in room 103 . If you go out the the main corridor and turn
right you will see where the maternity ward is."
"Thank you," said Tasia.
Tasia turned away to go see her friend. "Ah hah!" she nearly said
out loud. She remembered why that young woman had looked so
familiar! That same young woman had been there the first time that
Tasia had brought Brandy here . She had been very upset looking that
time, too. Tasia also remembered that she had seen this young nurses
aid on the news, trying to avoid the many news reporters and photographers,
bombarding her with questions and pictures about the hushed up
and mysterious death of a Nurse at the hospital. This all
happened about a month ago. Tasia continued to chew on the woman's
identity in her mind. Tasia felt the hair raise on her arms and she
shivered *Brrrr* She walked through the doors the young nurses
aid pointed her to. "I really do hate hospitals," she mumbled
to herself and she shook off the sudden chill. 'I will be glad when Brandy
is out of here,' she thought.
She walked down the corridor to the right and soon spotted room 103.




"Knock, Knock?" said a friendly voice. Brandy and her guests all said
"Come in!" together.



"Hello!" said Tasia cheerfully, and entered the room.



Tasia greeted Brandy, Dustin, Coral and Herb with a hug, much
to Herb's delight.
"Where's the baby?" Tasia asked with mock worry.
"Nurse Gretchen took him to get weighed and checked out by
the Pediatrician. She should be back with him any minute."
"Oh, I see," Tasia nodded.
After a few minutes of cheerful small talk among the group about
the night before and how cute the baby is...




... another guest arrived.

It was Turock, Tasia's hunky boyfriend. He was madly in love with
her but she would never make the commitment to marry him.
That did not deter Turock in the slightest. He seemed to know that it
was only a matter of time and persistence to wear her down.. ((SMILE.))



This time it was Coral's turn to be delighted. "Good morning," Turock
said to the room, and shot Coral with one of his beautiful smiles
that turned most women to melted butter.



Wow , what nice friends you have Brandy." Coral observed Turok
with a smile, and hint of a blush.
Brandy smiled at her mother, knowing exactly whom Coral was talking
about.
"Yes, they are very nice," Brandy agreed.
Dustin just smiled, he was used to women fawning over Turok, he was
just one of those lucky guys that seem to have it all. But Turok was a
very down to earth guy, and he and Dustin were good friends.
Only Tasia seemed to have some immunity to his charm and good looks.
Dustin knew that Turok could have his pick of most other women.



But Turock only had eyes for Tasia.
He knew she was his soul mate. She just did not know it yet.




'But things were coming along nicely,' Turock thought, while taking in the scent of Tasia's hair during their hug.



"I'm glad you made it," Tasia told him.
"I would not miss coming to see Brandy and the new baby. Where is the
little guy ?" Turok asked.




As if on cue, Nurse Gretchen returned with the baby and Dr. Brooks in tow.
"I just wanted to let you know Brandy, that the Pediatrician has
examined your son and has said he is in good health. You both should
be able to go home in two days."
Coral and Herb thanked him again for taking such good care of their
daughter and grandson.





Nurse Gretchen returned Skip Jr. to his crib, and Dr. Brooks left
the room. Tasia observed Nurse Gretchen more closely.
Nurse Gretchen gave her a knowing smile.
"I hope you don't mind me asking you, but are you related to the
young woman at the information desk.?"
Nurse Gretchen laughed, "Yes, she is my little sister by two years. We
look a lot like each other."
"You could pass for identical twins," Tasia confessed.
"Yes," Nurse Gretchen smiled. "She is still in nursing school, but once
she takes the floor with me , I am sure we will cause quite a stir."



Skip Jr. lay in his crib with his eyes open for a few moments before
dozing off to sleep.



Turok and Tasia walked over to the crib and watched the tiny infant
fall fast asleep.
"Brandy, he is such a beautiful baby," Tasia complimented.
"Thank you, he looks just like his dad Skip." said Brandy.




"I know someone else who would make beautiful babies," Turok told
Tasia, in a sincere and gentle voice.



Tasia laughed out loud. "Me a mother?? Haa haa very funny. You must
have me confused with someone else."
"Yes, you would make a excellent mother as long as I was the babies'
father." said Turok with a gleam in his eyes.



"You and I have children together?" said Tasia, as if the idea never
crossed her mind.



"Well, we would have to get married first, of course, to give the
children a proper home," said Turok not letting her off the hook.

Then much to his surprise ...



A Big, Huge, Red, Heart appeared over Tasia's head.




Turok got a startled look on his face, followed by a funny look in his
eyes as he stared at his girlfriend.




"Tasia, did you just fall in love with me at long last?"
Tasia swooned, and sighed and said "Yes, I suppose I cannot
deny the Big, Red Heart floating over my head."



"Are you sure you really want someone like me?", Tasia asked Turock.



"When we get home, I will show you just how much I really, really
want you." Turok told her. The air around the two seemed to sizzled
and snap; this did not go unnoticed by the rest of the people in the
room, who all bore witness to the Big Red Floating Heart.




"Wow, that is a huge, floating heart! Did you two just
fall in love?" asked Nurse Maggie, as she entered the room.


To be continued...

Thanks for reading. ....smile....
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#47 Old 8th Jun 2013 at 9:10 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 23
The Brandy Broke Story, Part 23
December 8, 2011



Welcome Back.



"Hi Brandy, how are you today? Dr. Brooks asked me to come and
speak with you, and help you with signing some forms that will be
difficult. Are you comfortable with that?" Dr.Kile asked.



"Yes doctor, I am glad that it is you,not a stranger. I would prefer
to just sign the release papers now for my baby that .... that did not
make it."
Dr.Kile produced the paper work and showed her where to sign. The
procedure of cremation would happen the following night. The infant's
body was being held in the hospitals morgue.




After signing all the papers, and reassuring the doctor that she was
OK, he finally left and Brandy was able to call her mom.



"Hi Mom, how is it going?" Brandy chatted a long time with her mom,
spoke with Beau on the phone, and had a few laughs.




Then it was just time to say good night, and Brandy hung up the phone,
pleased to know that her mom and dad were there with Dustin and Beau.




But after she hung up the phone, she found herself so very, very
lonely. She had felt this feeling before, right after the births of her
first children. She had shared her body all of these months with two
other people.




'One that was dead and she would never see!' her mind told her.




And then her emotions just went haywire! And she had every right
to lose it for a moment.



At first Brandy tried to hold it in...



All the sorrow and weirdness that she had endured just suddenly landed
on her.



"I want my baby!!" Brandy screamed at no one.




"God help me!!" she pleaded. Its not fair!!!!!!! she sobbed.



"It's gonna be okay, you're going to make it through this," Nurse Gretchen
told her.


To be continued...
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#48 Old 8th Jun 2013 at 9:40 AM
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 24
The Brandy Broke Story, Part 24
December 10, 2011




Welcome Back.



Thought I would start this part with a Smile.... *drooool*
Thanks Heather for making Turock's clothes!



"There now, all better," Nurse Gretchen continued to encourage Brandy.
"Now you call me if you need anything, OK?" Nurse Gretchen said.
"Thank you," Brandy said, feeling greatly comforted in her time of grief.
"I think I will take a nap." Brandy suddenly was very tired and
emotionally drained.



Brandy got back into bed, and Nurse Gretchen turned down the lights
on her way out. Little did Brandy know but something else had felt her
sorrow and grief.



She had no idea who or what was so terribly close to her and her living baby.



Later that afternoon, Nurse Gretchen came back to check on her patients, Brandy and baby.



The nurse's phone rang and she answered it right away.




Nurse Gretchen knew the caller on the other end; it was her
little sister Susan.



"Susan honey, calm down - Susan you have got to calm down," she
insisted.
"Honey, I know, but that was a month ago. You have got to try harder to
put this behind you," she said quietly, and calmly into the phone, trying
not to disturb her patient during this unexpected call.




"Susan, hush now she said calmly. I am off work in two hours. You
wanna go out for some pizza after work? OK then, that sounds good."
Nurse Gretchen calmed her sister down.
Susan was upset because today marked the one month anniversary of
Nurse Amy's Mysterious Death at the Hospital. Susan had watched
the whole bizarre scene as Nurse Amy died in front of her out in the parking
lot.
The coroners has said she officially died of blood loss . But the coroner
also said that she seemed to also die of fright.
His findings were inconclusive without further investigation.
Officially, she died of blood loss from a freak accident.




Nurse Susan would just have to stop herself from thinking about the
last few moments of Nurse Anna's life.



She remembered over and over that
Nurse Anna was covered in blood, and Nurse Anna seemed to be trying
so desperately to tell her something.It had been haunting Susan for weeks.



Nurse Gretchen tried to hang up the
phone quietly, but as soon as she did the baby gave a small
"whhhaaaa!!", and woke up Brandy who had not really been
asleep anyway.




"Was that your sister who you were on the phone with just now?" Brandy
asked Nurse Gretchen, when she came closer.
"Yes, we had a death among our staff here one month ago today, and
she was a witness to it. It really freaked her out.



"I remember that - it was on the
news about the nurse, the next day after I had my first meeting with
Dr.Banks. I knew who she was, I mean I had seen her working here
before. She seemed very nice."
"Yes, we were all shocked by the sudden loss of such a good friend,"
replied Nurse Gretchen, almost absentmindedly.



To be continued...


Thanks for reading.... smile....come back for more.... if you dare.... muahhaa haa!
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#49 Old 8th Jun 2013 at 12:00 PM Last edited by Tasia714 : 18th Feb 2014 at 4:27 AM.
Default The Brandy Broke Story, part 25
The Brandy Broke Story , Part 25
January 17, 2012



Welcome back.
Sorry this has taken me so long to write, but I wanted to
get it right. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for reading.



The sharp, final "click" of the crib woke Brandy up and reminded
her that she now had a new baby, and also that she had lost a baby.




She had many strange dreams in that couple of hours that she had slept after
signing the papers. She dreamed of house plants that seemed to grow and
grow, even though they had not been given water or sunlight. She also dreamed
of glowing boxes in closets hidden close by, and of floating in space among the
stars. Brandy was very happy to wake up from the dream.



"It was just a dream," the nurse assured Brandy, as she took Brandy's
vitals. Then she checked her feet for swelling. "Look's like someone
gets to go home with a new baby in the morning! "




"Really? Do you think I will get to go home in the morning?"
"Doctor says if you and your baby maintain your vitals, you're
good to go and you might not even have to stay for breakfast,"
the nurse joked.




"Hi Mom, .. uh-huh. Thank you mom for lending Dustin your car. I look
forward to seeing him and Beau. I miss my little guy."
"He misses you too honey; he has been talking non-stop about a rose." Brandy's mom told her with a bit of concern in her voice.
"He is probably just excited about his new baby brother," said Brandy.
"Love you too Mom, see you in the morning. I cant wait to go home. Bye."




As soon as Brandy hung up the phone, something almost expected happened
to Brandy. Beau, her two year old son was talking to her in her mind; she
could sense him.
"Mommy, you come now, come with Beau", he kept
saying to her. Then Dustin burst through the door.
"Mom, we have to go! Beau has vanished again, and he has not reappeared
like he usually does, but I think I know where he is at," Dustin gasped.



"Let's hurry, he is already near the hallway." said Brandy.
"You see it too?" Dustin asked his mother.
"Yes, I see it too, Brandy answered.
"Lets go!" said Dustin, he pointed to the wheel chair for his mother
to ride in. And as fast as you can push a wheel chair through a hospital
at top speed, they went in search of Beau.



They soon found themselves outside a older wing of the hospital, the
Morgue, where they keep all of the dead people that die in the hospital
before they get taken to the mortician, and then to the grave.
When they found Beau, he was crying just outside the sliding doors
that enter the building. "Rose, Mommy, you have to come and see Rose!"



"Beau, wait for Mommy and Brother," Brandy said, as she tried to
convince Beau to wait for her to pick him up and settle him down.



But Beau would not have it, and quickly transported himself inside the
building. Past the sliding doors before Brandy could get to him.
"Mommy, Bubby, you come." he waved to them.



Brandy and Dustin quickly followed Beau down the long, curved hallway.




"Have you seen Brandy Broke recently?", Nurse Gretchen asked. "No, but I
just changed little one's diaper. He was not happy about that wet
diaper. "Well, that's odd that she would just leave the baby," said
Nurse Gretchen. "I am going to have a look around and see if anyone has
seen her. I just have a wierd feeling." "Ok, I will take little one here,
and put him in the nursery by the nurse's station, so I can keep a eye
on him." "Sounds good, see you in a few." said Nurse Gretchen as she
headed out on her search for Brandy.



Meanwhile, in the morgue, something strange was happening. A portal had
been opened up, and a creature from another dimension was coming
through.




Sandsoom, was from a dimension of Earth in which the people lived in such
harmony with nature, that the humans there had become a sort of
'Tree People', who's specialty was growing things.



"Greetings Sandsoom," said Prince Valdir. I have been waiting here for
thirty days; I am so glad that you have found me."
"Your Highness, your father is very worried about you. We had no idea
what location you had gone to. We were all relieved when we noticed that
you did not go to the Volcano Dimension. As you know, our people cannot
survive there."
"This planet is not so very different from ours," said Prince Valdir.
"The people are a bit primitive, but they seem to have love for one
another."




"Love is everywhere in the Universe. It is the strongest of all forces
in any and all dimensions," said his loyal and caring Royal
Guard, Sandsoom. "I am glad that you have survived here, Your Highness,
now we must go; your father is eagerly awaiting your return." Prince
Valdir looked up at his Royal Guard,
"Sandsoom, I have something I would like to do, before we go. I need
to right a wrong." Sandsoom looked at his young Prince.
"Your Highness, we really should return promptly. Everyone is worried
and we don't want anyone to detect this portal; as you said the people
here are very primitive and they are not ready for such travels. Are you
sure this is necessary?"


"Yes Sandsoom, it is very important. I think it will haunt me in my
memories for the rest of my life if I do not at least try to make
amends," said Prince Valdir. He then went on to tell Sandsoom what
happened when he first accidentally arrived a month ago.

"Very well, what is it that you propose to do to make things right?"
"This is a place where they keep their dead", Prince Valdir said somberly
almost childlike. "Most here have died of natural causes, but one it seems, one did
not grow properly and has died before it was born. The mother is very
upset about it."



"Oh yes, I see her now. Such a little thing," Sandsoon said as he sensed
the tiny corpse in the morgue.



"Are you sure this is what you want to do Your Highness? Your father may
not approve."
"Yes, I am sure. I will answer to father and accept the consequences."
"Very Well, let us begin by asking the Great Creator if he will grant us
our request."




Sandsoon began his prayers that all of his people knew. The entire
population of his dimension shared the Eternal Glory of communicating
directly with the 'True One Grand Creator of Everything.'




Prince Valdir and Sandsoon his royal guard went together to prayer.
"Mighty Creator," they spoke with one mind. "We humbly ask for the life
and health of this young one. You alone control life and death, we ask
your blessing on this young one, that you bless her with health and
create within her a seed of Knowledge and Wisdom of Plants and Life
through you, Grand Creator."




"We praise you Grand Creator, for the life of this child, thank you Merciful Creator."




Then it happened - a branch shot up though the center of the cold metal
slab in the morgue that the dead, deformed baby lay on. The new red/green
shoot of a rose bush. Roses were a sacred symbol of life, blessings and
health in their home.



"Praise the Creator! He has blessed the child with life!"



"Give thanks to the Merciful Creator; by Your will we were created, by
Your will, we live!"





Then Sandsoom and Prince Valdir broke out into a Praise song; it sounded
like the wind when it blows it's strength through the tops of tall pine
trees, on a lovely summer day.



The room was all aglow with the growing rose bush, the sound of the
praise song, and the smell of the rose's pleasant and intoxicating scent.




" Your Highness, someone is coming," announced Sandsoom, as he prayed
with the young Prince and watched the deformed corpse of the infant girl
grow and start to breath. "You go and deal with the child's family while I
finish the prayers of Exaltation for this precious life the Grand
Creator has mercifully chosen to give Life and Health to."




Prince Valiant praised the Creator once more, and then turned just in
time to see Beau appear outside the sliding glass doors to the lab.




Beau was so excited as he neared the doors, he ran as fast as his
toddler legs would take him.He had known about Prince Valdir since
yesterday. Beau knew Prince Valdir had peeked in the window of his
mother's hospital room when his mother was crying about his baby sister,
who was born dead. Beau was physically connected to his mother and
always knew what was going on with her.




Beau heard his mother Brandy and Dustin quickly approaching. He started
to giggle as small children do when the game of chase is getting
good. He suddenly disappeared and reappeared right in front of Prince
Valdir, who picked him up and gave him a hug. Beau knew that Prince
Valdir was different, but also that he was good and had nothing to fear of
this plant person from another dimension. While he was holding Beau,
Prince Valdir was able to see that other people were looking for Beau
than just his mother. Other people were coming too.




"What shall we do Sandsoom? The child's mother and her doctors are close
behind her", he told the praying Royal Guard. The room of the morgue was a
sight to see, at that moment it was full of the presence of the Grand
Creator and His will was being done . The room glowed and smelled of
sweet roses, the rushing sound of the wind in tree's emanated from the
lips of Sandsoom as he praised the Grand Creator for his gift of Life to
this dimension and tiny female Child. That is when Brandy and Dustin
burst into the room in hot pursuit of Beau. They abruptly stopped as
they realized the beauty of the room and the strange creatures who were
next to Beau. Beau communicated telepathically with Brandy and Dustin
what was happening in the room and to not be afraid.

(Sorry folks I am out of time. I will come back later to post the rest of this chapter. Its kinda long and I have to go to bed.)
Thanks for reading.





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Mad Poster
#50 Old 8th Jun 2013 at 9:24 PM
Oh Ooooo! Baby not die! Baby go by-by! Nice tree man.

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