good attempt but definitely needs work (sorry)... in fact i shall do one too and we shall compare like stereophonics bums of love!... perhaps (?)
i would go for fuller, smileyer lips (he's never not grinning/laughing), higher eyebrows and fluffier hair
his cheekbones are more pointy too
god im picky, i apologise but i am so picky you could call me superpedantic girl

xxx