A chapter i wrote
Heres a chapter from my simpsons medival/victorian story saga: Under the light of the silver moon. Enjoy!
this story takes place in the ol' victorian days, you know, horse
drawn pickups, villagers, and evil creatures roaming around in the
forests across nearby towns and villages. now, Camilot and the known
flying reptiles with wings (no offense) dragons were at war, camilot was
using all the power they got to drive off the fire breathing creatures
now, a small family that lived in the woods, had a tragic past.
their father was killed in the start of the Dragon wars. right in front
of their daughter's eyes, now. the daughter and adopted son, Lisa and
Milhouse were sent out into the forest to go pick some fresh berries
for their mother, Marge. to make into her famous Blueberry pie.
"phew, you know lisa.. i'm getting a bit tired, can we stop for a bit?"
Milhouse asked, trying to catch his breath. "ok, sit down and rest,
don't worry i'll be back." Lisa said, handing Milhouse a jug of water.
Milhouse took off the cap and took a sip of it. he looked up to see Lisa
walking off into the forest, holding her wooden basket as she went.
Milhouse was about to get up to stop her, but he managed to stay calm,
and stay put but still, he had a hunch something might happen. Lisa
continued walking into the forest, looking around for any creatures that
might jump out and attack her. and possibly a berry bush to begin with.
she continued walking until she reached a large block of stone in her
path. she thought she noticed something carved in the stone. she walked
over to the stone and she was right, there were ancient runes carved in
the stone, she took out her handcrafted notepad and began to write down
the runes, translated in english, however, she was so distracted that
she didn't know she was being watched by something, a creature.. hiding
in the bushes behind her, the creature growled softly and began walking
towards her, however. the creature accidently stepped on a twig,
creating a loud SNAP! which caused Lisa to jump. "hello?" she asked,
shaking. looking around, nothing happened. she turned around and
continued writing in her notepad when all of a sudden, the creature roared
and leapt out and tackled her, she looked at the creature and breathed
heavily and whimpered, fighting the urge to scream. the creature had
brown fur covering it, the creature had pointed ears. the creature had
long black claws and worst of all.. the creature had white. sharp.
teeth. it looked at lisa, snarling beastly at her and looking right in
her eyes. when all of a sudden, the creature saw the scared look in
Lisa's eyes and the creature's eyes widened, the creature stood up,
which revealed that it was about Lisa's size. it looked at
her with a nervous look and then it said, "i'm so sorry.. i can't really
fight my instincts.. it often happens.." Lisa looked in the creature's
eyes and saw that the creature never meant to hurt her, she then asked the
creature a question, "w-what's your name?" the creature's nervous expression
slowly changed into a smile and it responded. "I'm Bart Simpson, who the
hell are you?"
Animating is tough, but once you get it done, its worth it for the views. and a full 5 stars of course.