I don't know if you guys would think so but I wrote a poem for my fiancé and I kind of want to use it for my Wedding vows...

Fulfillment

I underestimate him at times
He is more than I knew
Broken down but never failing
His smile feeds my saddest tendencies
while his tears bring me to my knees
strong like the undertow of a river
lights a room like a flame
Quiet but just enough noise
sweet as diesel
holds me up when I'm feeling weak
warm as a cup of soup on a cold day
he is fulfillment

What do you guys think?