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singing_Noel
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#1 Old 26th May 2011 at 12:20 AM Last edited by singing_Noel : 24th Sep 2011 at 5:32 AM.
Default Spicy Roll
Tuna, wasabi sauce, and rice...all rolled up in a seaweed wrap. This recipe probably best explains this love story. However, if you're still confused, you can always see it for yourself too.

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Lang_ea
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#2 Old 27th May 2011 at 11:05 AM
What? I can't believe nobody's commented on this yet~ I just read this before falling asleep and I really think it's a great start. The styling of the speech bubbles and wording is wonderfully funky, and the detail and the shots are really cool! So far the characters are really good as well, thanks for the upload, it was such a pleasure to read!
Misanthrope
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#3 Old 27th May 2011 at 12:16 PM
Oh god, your pictures are adorable xD I love the comic-like style.
Myshia
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#4 Old 27th May 2011 at 12:56 PM
Interesting beginnings.. the screenshots are so perfect~~
Lot of questions to ask Looking forward to read more
singing_Noel
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#5 Old 27th May 2011 at 1:38 PM
Waaawww! I'm so glad you all liked it so much!

Happy, happy, happy me!

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Thank you!
LovethMia
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#6 Old 28th May 2011 at 12:52 AM
This is great! Your pictures are beautiful and your sims are amazing! Keep up the good work, I love it.
singing_Noel
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#7 Old 28th May 2011 at 10:39 AM
Thank you! ^ - ^ I will!
singing_Noel
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#8 Old 28th May 2011 at 10:46 AM
Default Spicy Roll - CHAPTER 1




















Myshia
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#9 Old 29th May 2011 at 1:53 PM
Beautifully shot.. love the speech bubbles <3
Surprise.. surprise..
addict12
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#10 Old 30th May 2011 at 2:46 AM
I love it! Good cliffhanger btw.
singing_Noel
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#11 Old 12th Jun 2011 at 11:06 PM
Thank you both!

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singing_Noel
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#12 Old 12th Jun 2011 at 11:27 PM
Default Spicy Roll - CHAPTER 2
























Myshia
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#13 Old 13th Jun 2011 at 6:07 AM
Love the comic theme..
pictures are so beautiful and gorgeous <3

I loved it when they hugged.. so cute
singing_Noel
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#14 Old 13th Jun 2011 at 8:10 AM
I did too. : >

Thanks again, BTW!
LadyAwesome
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#15 Old 13th Jun 2011 at 9:20 AM
OMG Zoel - you make the most fantabulous sims. and your comic . . . shesh it's amazing. I feel like giving up mine now.

PS awesome Graphics card lol
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addict12
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#16 Old 15th Jun 2011 at 9:04 PM Last edited by addict12 : 17th Jun 2011 at 8:07 AM.
ZOMG! I love this chapter~! I be your zombie fan. Keep up the good work. Your shots are amazing.
Ziva_David_Ncis
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#17 Old 15th Jun 2011 at 9:11 PM
Love this :D
singing_Noel
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#18 Old 16th Jun 2011 at 4:41 AM
Thanks so much you guys. You're all so incredibly kind!

Still, I wouldn't give up your story kaylarox, I think it's great, and I'd be really disappointed if you did.

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I'll try to post the third chapter soon.

Thanks again!
LadyAwesome
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#19 Old 16th Jun 2011 at 12:47 PM
Awwww thanks. I am awaiting the next chapter
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surfer85
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#20 Old 16th Jun 2011 at 3:48 PM
I'm impressed. The quality of your screenshots/images is superb, which is of the utmost importance with a graphic novel like this. And the story overall has a very professional feel to it.

One little bit of constructive criticism I can offer, though, is that you can make it a little more obvious who the speech bubbles are attached to. For the first few panels, I had a hard time figuring out which character was saying what lines.
HystericalParoxysm
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#21 Old 16th Jun 2011 at 4:01 PM
This story is fantastic! I love it - especially the way you cut away to other stuff in the scenes like the bird. So artistic and cool and gives the whole thing a great feel. I'll be watching this one! :D
Phoeberg
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#22 Old 16th Jun 2011 at 7:29 PM
I love the detail in the scenes, it makes it look so much more real, and really original too. And you've got some beautiful shots and angles!
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singing_Noel
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#23 Old 17th Jun 2011 at 1:24 AM
Thanks so much you guys! I'm really overwhelmed by all your comments!

kaylarox: You're welcome! ^ ^

surfer85: Sorry to hear this. The reason why I try not to use arrow bubbles too much is because my main influence for this story is Japanese Manga, and Korean Manhwa, which probably seems obvious already. So I try my hardest to distinct the differences in the each character's way of speech to make it more easily evident to the reader who is speaking. Thing is, I'm also a big fan of newspaper funnies, which probably explains the horizontal paneling, as opposed to traditional vertical paneling, so it really cuts down on size, and room to position the bubbles properly.

Still, I'll try to use them more in the future, if they help.

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LovethMia
Lab Assistant
#24 Old 17th Jun 2011 at 5:55 AM
This is amazing! Please keep up the great work! Your pictures are beautiful and I love your Sims. : )
amora_selvagen
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#25 Old 17th Jun 2011 at 12:04 PM
I think is perfect the way it is... It does not hurt to use the brain a bit
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