I would like to read what should I change about my writing (except all the word mistakes)!



Although Trash family is doing better since Johnny has became a teenager, old tricks won't die - Johnny still is continuing to amuse himself with braking the fridge.



Yes, to be the smallest child and a girl in Trash family really is a sad thing. Everybody forgets about Chelsea.



When Billy at last has woke up, she noticed Chelsea screaming, only because she needs to go near her crib. Like all the house's windows weren't scattered out because of that sound...



I guess Billy has gotten out of the bed on the good side, because she can afford to play a little bit with her only daughter. At first Chelsea looked suspiciously at Billy...



Billy was making dinner when suddenly I couldn't understand what's happening - she started to twist like the Devil himself is incarnating in her.... Turned out it was Billy's birthday and she was starting to get old. Only Anthony came to congratulate Billy. Like it's something nice to become an old fart...



Even old Billy still is looking good. I guess with age she has become nicer, because she learned Chelsea how to walk and talk! Well, not without Johnny's assistance...



Billy left Johnny as a main gardener, Anthony his assistant but Andrew had nothing better to do than jump in the puddles...



As I said before - Chelsea is very musical. She loves to scream and to play music. Anthony prefers cars...



A picture just to show how really nice family they are without Billy and the outsider Andrew.
Anthony is practicing painting, Johnny is looking after Chelsea. He is still the best son and brother in whole Sim City. He has enough time to learn good, to work hard, to look after siblings and.. to get a girlfriend...



Twins after playing cops and robbers. Anthony always kills Andrew. But actually Andrew is really cute.



Billy still has special connection with wolves...



Nobody noticed Chelsea's birthday and she grew up as a little bum, but as for the only girl in the family she deserves to have better clothes, so Billy took her to small second hand shop.
While Chelsea was browsing trough clothes that stupid sales guy didn't cast his eyes off Chelsea. Like she's some kind of thief.



Stupid sales guy got pwned when Billy bought not just some clothes but even food.
And Andrew is such a gay, he was browsing ugly girl dresses.